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19. May, 2012 CVs, Finding a job, latest
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CV Workshop: Oliver Pelling

by Jonathan Frost

Ollie Pelling is a freelance journalist currently based out of Melbourne. Today we’re casting our eyes over his latest CV.

He graduated last year and wanted to get some feedback on it, so without any uni lecturers or peers around to help, he turned to the Hacks community for a some constructive criticism. So- do you like Ollie’s CV? What would tweak and change to improve it?

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advice 5pts

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rickhy9 5pts

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olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

Thanks for the feedback so far, it's all very helpful. The errors have already been ironed out, perhaps I'm not so meticulous after all?! 

 

At the time of writing I didn't really think anything of the use of "reputable" in the intro par, it just sounded better in my head than "looking to become part of an editorial team". Good to know it comes across to some as a bit arrogant though, definitely not what I want and I'll switch it out for something else.

 

As for my name being all big 'n stuff - I chose to do that because I wanted it to be in line with my website logo. I've kept the font is pretty low key, so I don't think it's too in your face. Having said that, bringing it down a little in size probably wouldn't hurt.  I don't think having my second name in a different colour is "overkill" either. If it was bright pink it might be a different story, but I don't think grey is going to offend anyone in a hurry. 

 

There may well be a couple of spacing errors too...had to copy and paste a fair bit between Word and InDesign and sometimes it doesn't translate too well. This CV is a continuous work in progress and I twiddle with it around once a month, so whenever I fix one error there's sure to be another just around the corner!

 

I appreciate the potential redundancy of "high quality" and the like too. Sometimes tricky to let people know you're half decent at what you do without sounding like an egomaniac. Will cut that malarkey out.

 

I didn't think the references at the bottom would be to everyone's liking. I kinda like 'em though. Everyone has that "Referees available on request" line, and I just think that if you can chuck in some real quotes from real people that like your work, why not?  I feel awkward enough selling myself on CVs and cover letters, so it takes the pressure off a little to have other people vouching for you. You can only toot your own horn so much. Also not a lot I can do about my referees not being "excptional" - that's what I got!

 

Thanks again, this is a massive help!

 

kj_corcoran
kj_corcoran 5pts

 @olliepelling sorry if I came across as being overly harsh re:referees - I meant to say that in your limited space (one-page CVs are definitely the way forward) an emphasis on exactly what you've written in your freelancing career might be a better emphasis. You certainly have a point about it being useful to prove that other people like your stuff, though equally I think having bylines in decent publications implicitly carries that proof as well - if Rolling Stone publish your stuff that's an implicit reference which could work just as well as a pull-quote.

anon87
anon87 5pts

 @kj_corcoran  @olliepelling To be honest I'd have to agree with kj here. pulling some random quotes from people in the industry just doesn't seem very professional at all. I'm not a linkedin person so I'm not all that informed, but it seems that linkedin recommendations are where you would look for that sort of thing, not the CV. I'm not saying this because I hate you, it's because in my opinion your CV should do anything it can not to alienate whoever is reading it. Not dazzling someone is one thing, but going to the other extreme and possibly antagonising a potential employer is certainly a bad idea, and if it were me, I'd find it irritating.

Actions speak louder than words, and the fact that someone is willing to commission you for a serious piece is far more impressive a few kind words.

Otherwise very nice.

olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

@anon87@kj_corcoran

 All good points and I'm glad you don't hate me, because that would be a little odd. I understand the benefits of LinkedIn and the use recommendations have there. Putting pull-quotes on my CV was a bit of an experiment - testing the water to see how they're received (I did read an article somewhere that said some employers are beginning to favour them, but I can't remember where).  While I don't think they're going to antagonise or irritate anyone, I get where you're coming from and I'll definitely reconsider their place and see if I can think up anything to better fill the space.

 

KJ, no need to apologise - a no bullshit approach is needed and much appreciated! As for being more specific with what I've written - that's why I've included the link to my online portfolio. I figured it would be more convenient for an employer if they had a link they could go to quickly and see my work, rather than talk about individual pieces.

 

I guess what I'm trying to do with this CV is make it a one stop shop that covers as much as possible (skills, experience, portfolio, references) whilst remaining quick and easy to digest for the employer. It's good to know what floats and what doesn't, so thanks a lot for your critiques! Anyone else out there got an opinion on the pull-quotes? I'm interested now...

 

sarahvmusgrove
sarahvmusgrove 5pts

@wannabehacks Oh dear. Another impressive CV. One day, MY CV will be good enough to submit in public to the Hacks...one day...

wannabehacks
wannabehacks 5pts

@sarahvmusgrove It is pretty good isn't it, but we're all at different levels. Shouldn't compare too directly. ^JF

_TomClarke
_TomClarke 5pts like.author.displayName 1 Like

Not sure about the use of reputable in relation to editorial team. Not sure any editorial team would see itself as anything other than that or at least they'd be striving for it. Also sounds a bit arrogant. 

 

It looks great but I've never been a massive fan of the HUGE name in the corner thing. I'd bring it down a point size or two just so it doesn't dominate the page as much. 

 

I'm not sure but there looks like there's a double space between 'journalist' 'looking' in the summary bit at the top left. There also looks like a double space on the bullet point down the right hand side that starts 'Very familiar'. In fact, looking again there are a few spacing inconsistencies after the bullet points - or at least it looks that way. 

 

Very small points - great CV Ollie

SarahLienard
SarahLienard 5pts

@olliepelling @wannabehacks Great CV!

olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

@SarahLienard @JoshuaDrewNoir thanks guys.

JoshuaDrewNoir
JoshuaDrewNoir 5pts

@olliepelling @wannabehacks Awesome CV Ollie!

Natalie Clarkson
Natalie Clarkson 5pts

Really great CV. My own feels entirely inadequate now. I actually quite like having references on your CV, they might only be short but it's good to show you're not the only one who thinks you're good at what you do! Obviously the minor typos Jonathan's mentioned need fixing but other than that I can't think of anything... if it ain't broke, why fix it?

olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

@wannabehacks @Frost_J whoops. Sent you an updated one a little earlier with corrected errors. You must've missed it. No worries!

Frost_J
Frost_J 5pts

@olliepelling That one is the revised version - "reccommend" is fixed!

olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

@Frost_J there's definitely a lesson to be learnt there about keeping various finished/unfinished versions of your CV separately.

olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

@Frost_J yeah, I sent another earlier today though. Turns out I sent you the wrong one. My bad for not beating the buzzer.

MediaSpank
MediaSpank 5pts

@olliepelling Done.

olliepelling
olliepelling 5pts

@MediaSpank thank you kindly. Will get on a response tomorrow! (I'm about to go to bed).

MediaSpank
MediaSpank 5pts

First off, it looks great. There's been a few CVs on the site with grammatical areas and I can't see any here (probably down to those meticulous subbing skills of yours ; ) A few very minor points:

I'd drop '/outlets', not sure what it adds (or means for that matter)

The sentence with 'engaging sales' in it needs tweaking

Not sure out the verb use in 'laying out' sentence when you talk about InDesign

And, I don't like it when proper nouns like Facebook or Australia are broken over two lines (pedantic?)

 

Frost_J
Frost_J 5pts

@olliepelling Hope you get some good feedback- the slow pick up on comments is because it's pretty damn good. We'll keep pushing it tomorrow

kj_corcoran
kj_corcoran 5pts

Good, clean colour scheme, except maybe having your first and last names in a different font colour is overkill.

 

Unsure about the use of "reputable" in your summary para - can come across as a bit snobbish, which few young journos can afford to be. Describing your freelance stuff as "high quality" also potentially a bit redundant. Also, is "skills and attributes" any different from just saying "skills"?

 

I wouldn't include references at the bottom like that - especially single-sentence ones seem a little perfunctory, a bit like quotes on a movie billboard. Your referees are decent but not exceptional, and an "available on request" would let you put in a bit more about yourself. All those freelancing credits at the start sound great - some more detail about the best pieces there would be a better use of space I think.

 

On a similar note, I would consider combining your first two bullet points, as they both essentially say "I freelance", but the second has specifics so is a lot more impressive. Also a link to The River's online output might be nice. Didn't it win a GSM award one of the years you were involved? Worth weedling in even if you weren't a major player in the award itself.

Jonathan Frost
Jonathan Frost 5pts

 @kj_corcoran Just so everyone is aware, Issuu, the place hosting the CV, automatically places links in where it can. It's not that Ollie has chosen to link some places and not others - this was an "offline" CV until placed on the Hacks site.

kj_corcoran
kj_corcoran 5pts

 @Jonathan Frost sorry I didn't mean hyperlinks - I meant typing a URL to The River's website, as has been done for Ollie's own portfolio.

Jonathan Frost
Jonathan Frost 5pts

I really like this CV. Love the design- it's clean with concise content, and let's your freelancing experience speak for itself.

Couple of typos though - "Greviille" and  "Slam Skateboarding Magazine Magazine".

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